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The Coat Pocket Mystery, Part One
A three part story from The Urban Brief. This is a work of fiction.
Priya found the note on a Tuesday, somewhere between Whyte Avenue and the Leduc commuter bus, with the wind pushing her down 99 Street like it had somewhere better to be. She had ducked into a thrift shop to get out of the cold and walked out forty minutes later in a grey wool coat that fit like it had been waiting for her. Twelve dollars. She did not need a coat. She needed to feel warm for once, and twelve dollars seemed a fair price for that.
It was on the bus, sliding her hands into the pockets, that she touched paper. A small square, folded in thirds, soft as cloth. She unfolded it under the bus light. In slanting blue ink, in handwriting so careful it looked like someone had practised it, were seven words and a letter. Dinner at six. Wear your scarf. Love, M.
Priya read it twice, then a third time. Then she folded it along its old creases and held it in her closed hand all the way to Leduc, the way you hold a baby bird.
She would have told someone about it, if there had been someone to tell. Her husband, Dev, was three weeks into a four week rotation at a camp north of Fort McMurray, and lately their conversations had shrunk to the size of text messages. Home safe? Yes. Tired? Yes. Love you. You too. Her mother had died in April, and the house still smelled faintly of cardamom when the heat kicked on, which Priya could not decide was a comfort or a cruelty. She worked double shifts at the hospital because a double shift left no room for the quiet. She was very good at not being home.
So the note went on the kitchen windowsill, propped against the fern, and for two weeks Priya looked at it every morning while the kettle boiled. Who was M? Who had needed reminding about a scarf? Whoever it was had been loved by someone who noticed whether he was dressed warmly, and that seemed to Priya the rarest thing in the world. She caught herself making up the rest. A husband in a hurry. A wife at the stove with her hair tied back. Dinner at six, every day, for years.
One night she even picked up her phone to send Dev a photo of it. She typed, Found something strange, and watched the cursor blink. What would she say next? That a stranger's note had made her cry in a kitchen at midnight? That she missed being someone's reason to wear a scarf? She deleted the line and sent a thumbs up to his last message instead. The little grey word Delivered sat under it like a door quietly closing.
On a grey Saturday morning she took the coat and the note back to the shop, the coat on her arm instead of her back, which felt oddly like leaving a friend at a train station. She told herself she was returning the paper in case it mattered to someone. She did not examine that too closely.
The shop was tucked behind a laundromat, all coat racks and cardboard boxes and the particular smell of a thousand other people's lives. At the till sat a small woman with silver hair and a cardigan the colour of oatmeal, a laminated tag on her chest that read LORNA, VOLUNTEER. Priya set the note on the counter and explained. Lorna listened politely, the way you listen to a stranger's story at a bus stop. Then she picked up the note, glanced at it, and stopped breathing.
"Where did you get this?" she said.
"It was in the pocket. Of the grey coat. I bought it two weeks ago. I only just noticed."
Lorna put on the glasses that hung from a chain around her neck and read it again, slowly. Her finger hovered over the letter M without quite touching it. "This is Margaret's hand," she said. "I'd know it anywhere. Look at the way she loops the top of that M. She wrote every price tag in this shop for twenty two years. I still have a drawer of them." She laughed, a small wet laugh, and pressed the back of her wrist to her mouth. "She's been gone three years this March."
Priya felt the floor tilt a little. "I'm so sorry. I didn't know her."
"Nobody did, really. That was Margaret. She kept her love notes private." Lorna wiped her eyes and looked up. "Do you know what her husband, Arthur, used to say? That he had never once left the house without one of these in his coat. Fifty one winters. She'd tuck it in while he was shaving. He never said a word about it and she never asked if he'd found it. That was how they talked to each other."
Priya swallowed. She thought of Dev, and the word k, and the way their last three calls had ended with both of them looking at the clock.
"Arthur passed this September," Lorna went on. "His daughter dropped off a whole carload of his things the first week of October. Coats, boots, a cribbage board. She asked me to price everything cheap so it would go to people who needed it." She stopped. A frown crept in, and she turned the coat over in her hands and found the inside collar. A small white tag was stitched there, with a care label and a store name. She read it, and then she looked at the donation card still pinned to the sleeve, written in a different, rounder hand. "Dad's good winter coat," it said. "Bought last October. Hardly worn."
Lorna lowered it very slowly.
"What is it?" Priya asked.
"Margaret died three years ago. Arthur bought this coat last October." Lorna's voice had gone thin. "That coat didn't exist when she was alive."
They stood there, the two of them, in the hum of the fluorescent lights, with a folded square of paper between them on the counter.
"Maybe he moved it," Priya said. "From an older coat. To the new one."
"Maybe." Lorna did not sound like she believed it. She picked up the shop phone and dialled from memory. "Joan, dear, it's Lorna at the shop. No, nothing's wrong. Well. I think you should come in."
Joan arrived in forty minutes, which meant she had driven fast from Sherwood Park. She was a tall woman in her early fifties with her mother's jaw and the tight, careful face of someone who has been holding up a great deal of weight in public. She had a school librarian's lanyard still around her neck from a Saturday book fair. She took the note from Lorna without a word.
Priya, watching, saw the exact moment it landed. Joan's mouth opened a little. Her eyes went down the page and back up and down again. Her free hand found the edge of the counter and gripped it.
"That's Mom's writing," Joan whispered.
"We think so, yes," Lorna said gently.
"No. You don't understand." Joan turned the paper over, turned it back, held it up to the window light. "I went through every one of those coats before I brought them in. I checked every pocket twice. There was nothing. I would have found it." Her voice cracked on the last word, and she steadied it with a visible effort. "And look at this ink, Lorna. It's barely faded. This paper has been folded and unfolded a thousand times, but it has never sat in a dark pocket for three years."
Priya had not noticed that. She had thought the softness meant age. She realized now it meant handling. Someone had held this note, read it, folded it up again, hundreds of times. Someone had carried it close.
"I can't even call my brother," Joan said, half to herself. "Ken and I haven't spoken since we sold Mom and Dad's house. He'll say I'm imagining it. He'll say I'm just looking for her." She pressed two fingers hard against her lips. "And maybe I am. But I know what I'm holding."
"Dad bought that coat last fall," Joan said. Her eyes found Priya's, and Priya felt the full force of a person who had just stepped through a door she had believed was a wall. "My mother has been dead for three years. She cannot have put this in that pocket." She drew a breath that shook on the way in. "So who has been writing to my father?"
Nobody in the shop moved. Outside, a bus sighed at the curb and pulled away.
Then Joan reached into her bag, took out her phone, and began to scroll with fingers that were not quite steady. "There's something else," she said slowly. "I didn't tell anyone, because I thought I'd imagined it. At the funeral in September, an older man I'd never met stood at the back of the church. He didn't sign the book. He left before the lunch. And when I walked out afterward, he was standing by my father's car, and he was holding a coat."
She looked up. "A grey one."
Priya's hand went to the collar of the coat she was still wearing. It was warm. It had been warm all this time.
To be continued next Friday. What do you think happened? Tell us in the comments on our Facebook page.
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